What Do You Do?

Business Communication   Written by Mary Morel on 10/2004 - Word Count: 818
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Many people have difficulty answering the question: 'What do you do?' It's easy to fall into the trap of being too modest, saying too much or delivering what sounds like a sales pitch.

 

The best responses - known as elevator pitches or statements, audio bites, sound bites or benefit statements - are:

 

  Short - no longer than 30 seconds

  Sincere - which is why word perfect scripts often don't work

  Specific - without generic or buzz words, such as  'communications' and 'empower'

  Engaging - the listener wants to know more

  Interesting - stories work well as a follow up.

 

Some common formulas you can use are:

 

1. Labels

In social networking situations, the question ‘What do you do?’  is often just a courtesy so people introduce themselves with a  label—‘I’m an accountant’, or I’m a management consultant’.

 

Sometimes a label is not helpful as listeners may assume wrongly they understand what accountants or management consultants do.

 

2. You know how…

You start with ‘You know how …’ then follow up with  ‘What I do is’. For example:

 

‘You know how you sometimes struggle at work because your internet connection drops out and you have to restart your computer all the time?  Well, we fix those problems for businesses.’

 

3. Talk in terms of solutions

We’ve all been in conversations where people launch into boring, detailed explanations of what they do.

 

Alan Weiss, author of Million Dollar Consultant gives an example of such a response:

 

‘I'm a consultant who focuses on the interactions of teams, especially cross-functionally, raises sensitivity to synergies possible in greater collaboration, and implements processes to enhance team connectedness. I use instruments such as...’

 

He suggests a better technique is to think in terms of solutions using the following structure.

 

‘I help/ work with/ assist [name of your target market] [name your solution].’

 

So the previous answer could’ve been ‘I help clients improve individual and organizational performance’.

 

4. Relate your answer to  ‘problems’

In InfoGuru Marketing Manual, Robert Middleton recommends a similar approach, but with more emphasis on ‘problems’.

 

He uses the formula:

 

‘I help/ work with/ assist [name of the target market you work with] who are struggling /having problems with/ etc. [name their problem].’

 

He gives the following examples:

 

‘I help professional service businesses who are struggling to attract clients.’

 

5. Create visual pictures

When you talk, consultant, writer and speaker Michael Lovas says that people don’t listen to your words, instead they look for images in your words. So create a visual picture that’s real for your audience. He gives the following examples:

 

‘Jane, what if you had an emergency and needed someone to take care of your children and your home. That's me. I help families protect the things that are dearest to them.’

 

6. Ask for referrals in a group introduction

When you have 30-60 seconds to introduce yourself to a group, you can use this time to ask for referrals. In Masters of Networking, Steve Lawson illustrates what a wasted opportunity self effacing introductions are.

 

‘I watched a travel agent stand in front of twenty-five business associates and say, “I guess you all know what a travel agent does, so  if you are going on holiday call me.” I could almost hear her audience thinking, Nope, can’t take a vacation this week. How much more powerful and effective it would have been if the travel agent had said, “Last week our agency bought a large block of Caribbean cruise tickets at a ridiculously low price. If you’re talking to friends, clients or business associates, and they complain of  being overworked and tired, tell them you know of a travel agency that has  some unbelievable three, four or five-day cruises at amazingly low prices!  Listen for two key phrases this week: ‘I’m tired,’ and  ‘I’m overworked’. When you hear those phrases, think of me.”  By saying this she would have both educated her associates and got them  looking for a specific kind of referral for her.’ (P199)

 

Follow up

 

If your listener asks you questions  about your elevator pitch you can:

 

  Ask  what industry  they’re in and explain how your products or services could benefit  them and their business.

                  Follow up with a story. ‘We recently worked with a  client who…’ Then tell your prospect what the situation was  before you worked with the client, what you did for them, without going  into too much detail, and what happened as a result of your work.

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Mary Morel is the author of Promote Your Business, and a series of “How to” write effective marketing material for your small business. She also writes for corporations, government departments and not-for-profit organizations and runs public and in-house writing courses in Australia and New Zealand.  http://www.themfactor.com.au For more information



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